poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Eternity by Dovina.

ALChemy25 Oct 2005

If "But the opposite is true" refers to "It’s location location location" then bravo. If it refers to "Her condition’s going down" than BOO! It's the meat of a contradiction sandwich because you follow with -"Strength and vigor exhausted". I know you're taking what the doctors are saying out of context but it's a bit confusing. Did you write this in MS Word because all the first letters in each line are capitalized.

Interesting point of view. Optimistic, no sense of dread what-so-ever.