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Loving An Angel (Lyric) by Brego

The Morning Sun illuminates my eyes... As I looked into the clear skies. Heaven, it seems so near and I could see... An Angel Looking, smiling at me. Gazing above is the only thing that I could do. Wishing that I could be with you. But I was meant to live in this wretched world... Where love and innocence is ridiculed and ignored. The warm breeze and the comfort of air... Destroys my doubts and despair. Heaven, It seems so near and I could hear... An angel calling me, whispering to my ear Falling into my sleep, I dreamed... A Place where the guiding light cannot be dimmed. If it was just a dream or a Foolish fantasy, I wished it could go on for all eternity But... Destiny abandoned me, and she was gone... My eyes, no longer Illuminated by the Morning sun. Heaven, It seems so far and I could no longer see... The angel who was once looking, smiling at me. Blinded by ignorance and it was hidden... I am deaf and dumb to believe in... Love is the word for forbidden... And time that I've wasted is not forgiven. Now that I'm alone and she sleeps forever, I hold these regrets of not telling my love for her. Heaven, It seems so far and I could no longer hear... The angel who was once calling me, whispering to my ear. Breathing these cold air, I felt a presence of Relief... That you're still with me, curing my grief. And to fool myself, I wished that I've never lied. Only in dreams, We are together, smiling and forever satisfied.

Niphredil 18-Oct-05/5:39 AM
but why do you keep the pointless capitalization? It's not even uniform... in a sentence like this, for instance,
'If it was just a dream or a Foolish fantasy,'

there's absolutely no necessity to capitalize within the sentence.




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