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It’s getting dark (Other) by Prince of Void

But poetry of imagery could fill my sight Take me for awhile to my own ecstasy My eyes will drown in shots stand side by side Each cut cuts the frame of my life Edited slowly into other side Making sign of the God in myself Faded mysteriously overnight Come back to the scene of The moment still wonders And taste the pain and enjoys They are dissolving Upon the shade of a eye Then fading into the light It’s getting dark

ALChemy 14-Oct-05/12:30 PM
Your use of fragmented sentences is obtuse.

"an eye" Unless your making some obscure reference to the movie A.I. which I doubt.




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