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Regrets, No More (Lyric) by writteninskin

set to spin infinitely a world of past and future mysteries. wrapped up tears of sorrow, wilting as my life is just beginning. no more does distraction kill me as I search for love, descending deeper into sinful dreamings: regrets, no more, i have within me. when one time i was forgiving all my error, misbehaving; a child in despair and needing love to keep me from deceasing. but no longer do i need to be given pain with great deceiving. now i know of true love's healing. now i know that they deceived me. now i know the truth in hiding. love is not meant for decieving. love is not a sinful dreaming. i have known love from decievers but true love's meant for true believers. no more does distraction turn me. no more is the world of mysteries set to spin infinitely.

Heather Dee 17-Sep-05/3:40 PM
I like this one regardless of your other comments you have recieved. Don't listen to all the negative remarks take anything constructive that they might add and leave the rest of the bull shit behind. Otherwise you will get to the point that you never will want to pick up the pencil again.




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