tianyi16 Sep 2005

I liked

when she died face down
on fresh linen.

'Beauty' was shot in the hind leg
tried to stand three times but fell.

But all in all not enough insight or images that will stick in my mind. It reads like hopelessly melancholic list of how crap things are. "Grandma's dead, I'm a bastard, Grandpa shot my horse, Grandpa's dead"

Perhaps just focus on one of these.