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Rejuvenation (Free verse) by Dovina

She sat before the easel, mixing oils on a palette. The scene we both were looking at was the scene I wrote on pad. Her strokes and colors by impression from somewhere in her mind. My words described the daffodil— hard, like yellow polished steel. Together we made our impressioned strokes for so delicate a plant. Both had said before we started, a flower has but one true role. But with so many other traits, let’s give it something more. We’re past the stage of bearing kids, let’s take the flower’s goal, And change the two from making seeds to making weak things strong.

Dovina 11-Sep-05/11:20 AM
I can say that those are steps and side effects in reaching the goal of making seeds. Yes, I will say that. We’re talking about purpose and goal here. Strange how the path to a mundane goal sometimes becomes beautiful.




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