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Strength (Free verse) by Dovina

If I disapproved as strongly as I think you disapprove, I would rage. It takes strength to live a life you don’t like. But when you find beauty even there, I’m amazed.

zodiac 8-Sep-05/4:22 AM
No. The amount that she disapproves doesn't appear to necessitate raging. At least, not if you assume she isn't raging. Maybe you don't, but then the poem just kind of evaporates, doesn't it?




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