ALChemy23 Aug 2005

First I loved "fucked on the floor." (says it all) and the double meaning of "tenterhooks".
Shouldn't it be "THE rabbit ears" unless you have more then one set.
"into the dawning world" is the only somewhat cliche line in an otherwise clicheless poem.
This poem reminds me of an even sadder moment in my life. I may just might write about it now. Thanks for inspiring me. -9-