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tanka(1) (Other) by shadows

We spoke last night and I could feel the hate in her voice. The howling wind bangs on the door but I don't hear it. I'm playing music.

impert&ent 20-Aug-05/12:19 PM
I like bits of this a lot, but overall it's a bit too matter-of-fact. Takes away some of the metaphors that might be brewing.




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