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Forever by my side (Free verse) by RGSsparky

As you turn to leave, I feel empty inside. Just want you here next to me, Forever by my side. Can't stand your absense, Makes me long to fade to nothing. So it wont hurt when to you i see your back, Driving away from this something. I love you more than words can tell, But yet I try every day. Always going to be longing for you, Til tommorow again, you come my way.

Dovina 12-Aug-05/7:23 PM
Good thoughts, but need better poetic expression.




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