poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Shape of Shadows by MacFrantic.

pennymarie1 Aug 2005

I really really like this

V1:
Inside of us all
A lingering loneliness

After the fall
I'm sure it will find us
Of this I'm...

Breaking away
Finding a darker place [FINDING A DARKENED PLACE]

Finding some shade where I can
Rest my head and rest my anger

Chorus:
You know it's true
The truth that makes my blood turn black

You know it's true
And if I could I'd give the truth right back [I LOVE THESE 2]

Finding all the broken corners
Where you left us all behind
To save yourself
From the darkness

The shape of shadows in your mind

V2:
Lead me today
Follow the road that cuts my heels

Far and away
I'm sure we'll escape now
Of this I'm...

Lying in silence
Fearful of sight and pain[FEARFUL OF MY INVASIVE PAIN]

Finding the point where all these
Ghosts came from to walk in my dreams [ THIS NEEDS A LITTLE WORK IT DOESN'T FLOW WELL]
SEARCHING FOR THE POINT,
ALL THESE GHOSTS INVADED OR CRASHED MY DREAMS

hope I could help.. this was very good
Penny