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Brighter (Lyric) by Miggy

I take a simple moment just to stop Giving thanks to someone I can’t be without Seeing the love I have for you that I finally found (Bridge) Cause when I’ll your face With that enchanting grace Something gets over me (Chorus) Reality keeps pulling us apart So I’m getting sick and tired You bring me closer to my heart And make my day a little brighter The outside always tells me to repel But I can’t withstand the ways that I felt Too heartwarming that I couldn’t even tell (Bridge) (Chorus) Here’s my token of appreciation For every ounce of your patience And of every second of your forgiveness (Bridge) (Chorus/Ending)

drnick 29-Jul-05/10:49 AM
Boring, boring, boring. Too specific/personal and waaaaay too played-out a theme. Do you write songs for John Mayer? Take some drugs.




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