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My Mornings were Filled with Nightmares and Pies (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp

Raspberry hate Molesting my plate Can I escape My blueberry fate Nothing but lies Nothing but pies Sweet smelling clouds Darken my skies Marshmellow pain Blackberry rain Beaten to death With a long sugar cane These are the thoughts These are the notions Choking my throat Like apple pie potions

zodiac 29-Jul-05/4:18 AM
"Sweet smelling clouds Darken my skies" is the best description of the men's tent at an Arab wedding I've ever read.




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