poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Hindsight by darby pyn.

Bankrupt_Word_Clerk23 Jul 2005

I read this once and hated it. I read it a second time and hated it. I just now read it again while listening to a song called Pathogenic Occular Dissonance and now feel like dying.

two lines you should keep: "I stole my father's eyes to see" and "These are sad eyes I stare through"

junk the rest and say something understandable.