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where to go (Free verse) by AskittlesK

Purple Sky hazey sun not sure which way to go follow the darkness, Maybe the dark I always love a challenge. Maybe the sun, save myself from depression. The dark is always sucking you deeper even just thinking about it it drives you mad. I'm being sucked under. Deeper and deeper I go screaming carries everywhere. To the point that I am suffocating and then I'm not there.

LilMsLadyPoet 11-Jul-05/9:25 PM
Wow, this is wild...I like the night, the dark, the moon...I like the wildness of night breezes, and shifting clouds. But I suspect you speak of another kind of darkness, here. Yes, the sun...they say it is nearly as affective as meds, for depression. I love the ending line. Abrupt. nice job.




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