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Almost Persuaded (Free verse) by Dovina

While we’re sleeping something’s keeping the world spinning uniformity winning While we’re dueling for knowledge drooling something’s ambling comfortably ruling Something sensible? Responsible? Reprehensible!

Bluemonkey 11-Jul-05/11:28 AM
Good rhymes. Not wild about the poem itself, but I'll give you a 6 for that.




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