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Almost Persuaded (Free verse) by Dovina

While we’re sleeping something’s keeping the world spinning uniformity winning While we’re dueling for knowledge drooling something’s ambling comfortably ruling Something sensible? Responsible? Reprehensible!

darby pyn 8-Jul-05/11:05 AM

it feels political.
it’s vague. I like vague shit I’m the
king of vagueness. the last word reprehensible.
it feel like. what we don’t know wont hurt us
but it’s bad. like the means justify the ends.




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