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DEATH (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

death awaits you like a lion ready to strick death huants your every move blakend heart and hardend face as death takes your very soul the flower withers and falls to the ground moisterizing deaths evil stare. do you wait until death beats you by? worry about your own heart which flickers in the dark.

DoubleU 19-Jun-05/5:27 PM
Alright; you are dyslexic. Nothing to be ashamed of and it's definitely curable. But I'd like my enamel to last a little longer so I better steer clear from your poetry from now on...




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