DoubleU19 Jun 2005

>>my arm is red<<
There are actually a lot clues and I admit, I didn't see them. A new approach is required...
No, it's not a good poem. It's far, far too long and is basically a written account of a filmed event with a soundtrack of you telling what you, at exact this and this moment, think and feel. It's really too much. Subjects like these call for subtility. Poem's not crude, it's not graphic, it's simply too much.