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Nesting Instinct of Women (Free verse) by Dovina

Inside the hive a virgin worker lies bent head and folded wings sealed within her quiet cell until awakened from larval sleep by caress and beating of her sisters' wings She fears to leave behind the fixed prismatic form hesitates at the void of space the brilliant outdoor color and shrinks from loneliness of light Duty draws her from the nest wind twists her from the course but she knows she can return to familiar smell of honeycomb where her sisters work and others wait to be born

Dovina 19-May-05/4:16 PM
The question makes perfect nonsense as worded, at least to anyone operating on a cognitive level above that of mollusk. I personally think peas have it all over mollusks, particularly in remaining on this planet and not trying to wander all over various worlds, not realizing this is the only one we get.

Even while you mock the logical process with such ridiculum, I shall answer, hoping that for a change you will see the matter in earthly reality.

An interpretation is a possibility when it is a possible meaning of the poem. Of course that makes almost any interpretation a possibility. Some make more sense than others, but Hallmark’s is not so far out of reason that it in not as possible interpretation. Such a simple answer seems unworthy of saying.




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