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Returning (Free verse) by Dovina

Embers of burned out nights still glow between us while old dust gathers 'round our feet years since I danced with you in that young ballroom tonight so pensive, philosophical that room seems a former life Back hurting, heart recluse it's a matter of indifference reincarnation, I think to a lesser karma Hospital visits replace bedroom visits expensive restaurants for sack lunches It's not that I've given up on love it's just another kind – less passionate, more soulish happy with someone who's done the miles opened his once-closed mind and might even, before its too late his heart too

Prince of Void 10-May-05/9:33 PM
may i have returned for thounsands time
may i have knocked the door of ageless heaven for thounsands
may i have kissed the princess in the dark gothic castle
may i have reached enlightenment for once i have heared the name
may i have known you
may i have been in othersied and opened the secert of creation
all these" mays " will be expreinced soon
and return to this time that i cant be sure of those "mays"
finaly when will i return to myself ...myself i mean the love
this is my ultimate returnig ..returning to the love




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