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Racism (Free verse) by Dovina

When a tiger's ripped your arm off and six have opened your belly head and heart all wounds now old and scarred then anything looking like a tiger makes you wary to say the least I am not a tiger as you suspect but only look that way an appearance I cannot change and you could know it too if you'd let me have some time But you cannot allow the risk and I will not pursue So warily we eye each other til someone makes a move

Dovina 30-Apr-05/9:02 AM
Maybe the cumbersome wording is from lack of punctuation. I'm trying to do entirely without it here in hope that readers will pause at the end of each line. Please let me know if reading it that way does not help.




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