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Returning (Free verse) by Dovina

Embers of burned out nights still glow between us while old dust gathers 'round our feet years since I danced with you in that young ballroom tonight so pensive, philosophical that room seems a former life Back hurting, heart recluse it's a matter of indifference reincarnation, I think to a lesser karma Hospital visits replace bedroom visits expensive restaurants for sack lunches It's not that I've given up on love it's just another kind – less passionate, more soulish happy with someone who's done the miles opened his once-closed mind and might even, before its too late his heart too

zodiac 30-Apr-05/7:19 AM
I didn't see this comment until after I'd posted my reply. Sorry. Just to make sure we're on the same page, I'm not turning over any leaves. I've always responded positively to things I think are sensible, well-thought-out, or well-put, and disliked things I think are unreasonable or poorly-put. Most people, I gather, have some idea of liking people which, to use Dan's example, means applauding even their mistakes. I don't. Or here, at least, I don't. This poem and several other good things you've posted are perfectly respectable and deserve good responses. If you've got the idea that I'm kind of blanketly crapping on everything you do (maybe because of some personal animosity on my part), I hope you'll change it sometime.

PS-Sorry for saying you're only pithy and 10-giving.




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