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All You Need Is Gloves (Free verse) by -=DIABETES=-

Gloves, gloves, gloves. Gloves, gloves, gloves. Gloves, gloves, gloves. There's nothing you can feel that can't be felt Nothing you can smell that can't be smelt Nothing you can say but you can learn how to keep your hands warm It's easy! There's nothing you can bake that can't be baked Nothing you can rake that can't be raked Nothing you can do but you can learn how to keep your hands clean It's easy! All you need is gloves, all you need is gloves, All you need is gloves, gloves, gloves is all you need. Gloves, gloves, gloves. Gloves, gloves, gloves. Gloves, gloves, gloves. All you need is gloves, all you need is gloves, All you need is gloves, gloves, gloves is all you need. There's nothing you can sew that isn't sewn Nothing you can weave that isn't wov'n Nowhere you can be that isn't near a glove manufacturer It's easy! All you need is gloves, all you need is gloves, All you need is gloves, gloves, gloves is all you need. All you need is gloves (all together now) All you need is gloves (everybody) All you need is gloves, gloves, gloves is all you need.

patty t 25-Apr-05/5:39 PM
I disagree; keep it as 'IS' - going with the gramatically correct choice would completely throw off the Lennon cadence.

Actually, with rhythmic considerations in mind, maybe change it to 'A glove (sing) is all you need' not 'gloves is' (plural)




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