poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Forbidden Fruit(2) by thepinkbunnyofdoom.

Dovina8 Apr 2005

I get the forbiddenness you want her to see. But it seems that if you want to use that Biblical analogy, it would be better to talk of Eve and a serpent and the enticing fruit on a tree she was told not to touch. And twist that image into the things your are saying.