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Vietnam (Free verse) by the_poetess

What good are the no-nothing rainbows What good is the sun, what good is the moon, What good are the stars? When all the gold rusts, when all the star dust no longer floats from the sky where will the fairies and dragons go, where will we send the magical children, made from this fairy and dragon love. When misty clouds no longer appear, and good luck rain no longer falls, when the re-education camps go on forever and the future no longer remember the past, where will the fairies and dragons go, where will we send the magical children, made from this fairy and dragon love.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 3-Apr-05/6:58 PM
Vietnam and Fairies? Are you mad? -4-

Stick with the things within your sphere of knowledge and ability, until your better practiced in both. This looks like a failed attempt to explain your thoughts and feeling over something, you don't know enough about, in a form, you don't know enough about.

<3 Jason




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