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A Love in the Distance (Free verse) by kristenk69lover

A love in the distance... It's so hard to live without his touch, A simple kiss or hug from him, And not being able to look into his eyes. To say, "I love you," And to comfort him when he is down, And has trouble getting back up again. When will this distance go away? When will he be able to hear what I say, Without talking on the phone? When will my hurting subside, And when will we both stop being alone? I know it hurts you, But you have to be strong! If we get through this and love each other just as much as we do right now, Our love will be lifelong. I love you, Baby, Even though we're so very far apart. Always remember that I love you. You hold the key to my heart.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 30-Aug-02/9:12 AM
You're just following people whom you dislike and contradicting everything they say. This poeme is awful. You know it, I know it; even kristen here knows it. So let's just be mature about it, OK? Great!




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