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true love (Free verse) by francis nor capule

true love waits, so they say... for that day that both your hearts sing in unison when all pretenses are gone and no more doubts follow when each and everything you lay eyes on just seems a little brighter true love waits, so they say... for each and every lonely pang of your heart answered that embrace just a little tighter and words exchanged a little sweeter true love waits, so they say... that your souls can do nothing else than to respond to each other and nothing in this world, would keep you apart so i have to be just a little perfect each and every day... and i wish that my true love would wait... until that day.

Dovina 28-Mar-05/7:07 AM
I don't know these idyllic people in "so they say." Sounds like you could wait a long time.




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