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Cancer (Free verse) by mindsigns

It changes and grows through veins so helpless until the inevitable I am your source tempted and useless chided and vile partaking in your irony so that I may fixate so shall you submit.

Dovina 25-Mar-05/2:36 PM
Aparently, you are speaking to the cancer in "I am your source . . ." If so, the first word should be "You." Try changing "fixate" to "die."




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