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A good little poem (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

In a time when thoughts turn to Rye (bread) and infommercial possibilities One realizes some things might have worked, rye has always been rye, yet the pickle is as fresh and crisp as ever.

durr_T_hip_E 22-Mar-05/11:46 AM
I'm not sure what it is; unfortunately, the delusional worldly web in my mind simply doesn't like it. I like pickles so you got one point for that. And, I like rye bread, so you got another for that. But, all I see here is you telling me that when you think of bread and infomercials, you also think of pessimism and things that didn't work so that you may appreciate the fresh pickle in your mouth.

If you wanted me to picture some random guy eating a pickle on rye, then good job.

Peace,

Sean




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