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INTRANSIT
In a time when thoughts turn to Rye (bread) and infommercial possibilities One realizes some things might have worked, rye has always been rye, yet the pickle is as fresh and crisp as ever.
Dovina
21-Mar-05/6:46 AM
Do you really need (bread) after "rye" and "possibilities" after infomercial. You did say it's a little poem. Thoughts turn rye is good. Why not infomercials piclke?
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