thepinkbunnyofdoom19 Mar 2005
As I'm sure you've been told, this is god aweful long.
Each of these poems are great. I love the images and the way that you have painted with the canvas of my heart.
If these poems wouldn't all have had worked together, exactly the way they do, my vote would have been a 5(one for each poem here), just for being so long. But as is, 10. Excellent writing.
<3 Jason