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Sleeping Beauty (Free verse) by fevriere

The sorry sleeping daughter whose white pricked finger wore a single rosy bead felt her heart wake one Monday afternoon. The patient purposed prince whose kin did not believe in fairystories read in her repose enchantment.

richa 16-Mar-05/3:12 AM
Cute. Except that two lines seem to have inexplicably become detached from both the first and second verses of this two verse poem.




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