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Gabriel (Free verse) by tadpole

His smile A mystery to many That he smiles at all A wonder to some Pleasures of sense are few to be found His joy immense, unending, uncommon Lived out through simplicity All actions amorously done He watches over even me Hoping I'll change Like an elder brother I can't let down

sliver 14-Mar-05/7:49 PM
A good image, I just like the way it sounds.




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