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Advertising says: (Free verse) by Dovina

be yourself conform to trends dress different dress in style eat healthfully eat tasty fat workout relax invest spend credit is good don’t pay interest do it yourself call a pro run sit hurry wait so go with the averages you’ll do all right

richa 2-Mar-05/11:39 AM
Eat healthfully? If you really believe advertising is some great contradiction because some people want you to spent your money on their tat and not someone else's but that someone else wants the opposite then I would at least suggest portraying these people asking you to be fat or to 'eat healthfully'. And what is the spacing all about, 44 words on 31 lines!




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