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Last Time (Free verse) by DevilBuni

I'd give anything to see him one last time And revel in his presence Just one more hug One last kiss I want to see in his eyes that he no longer cares I want to feel it in his embrace; in his kiss I want to feel his heat beat out of sync with mine Then I will know Then I can go on with no more doubts that we made a mistake.

DevilBuni 28-Feb-05/10:42 AM
I understand and thank you for your comment...just one thing doesnt make sense to me.

Part B: wtf does this have to do with me? Are you saying you have a problem with my nick? Please refrain from commenting my handle and stick to the poetry.




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