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Last Time (Free verse) by DevilBuni

I'd give anything to see him one last time And revel in his presence Just one more hug One last kiss I want to see in his eyes that he no longer cares I want to feel it in his embrace; in his kiss I want to feel his heat beat out of sync with mine Then I will know Then I can go on with no more doubts that we made a mistake.

Dovina 26-Feb-05/6:58 AM
You must forgive INTRANSIT. He drives long hours in a semi on coffee. Don't get me wrong, his suggestions are good, and you'd do well to pay attention. But overall, you've got a good theme here.




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