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A Sinner’s Prayer (Free verse) by Dovina

O Thou who made with pitfalls The world I wander in Would surely not Impute my fall to sin Or require sorrowful contrition For mistakes made so enticing. No loving God would sit so smug, Take pleasure in my groveling. I conclude it must be in Your will Not to hear my sorrowful calls But to watch a learner navigate Pitfalls with a few less falls

zodiac 17-Feb-05/4:24 AM
Q: Do you think God reads your poems?

Q2: Do you think God pays more attention to your poems than he does to, say, the Sri Lankan praying 'O God please whatever you do don't send a tidal wave anytime soon, see I just bought this new car and it's a Hyundai with leather interior standard etc etc etc'?

Q3: You're a Christian. I know this isn't a question. If you just admitted you were a Christian, you'd be happier maybe, but probably not.

Q4: Dear me, your 8 months on poemranker have put you on the side of
- preaching
- didacticism
- illogics forcibly repeated in the face of uncomfortable reason
- telling not showing
- flagrant cronyism
- affirmative action
- racists
- misspelling
- more illogic
- and God.

Are you George W. Bush?




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