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Little Fly (Other) by PodPoet

There used to be a little fly Who saw the world through all her eyes On everything touched by her little feet Instead of germs, she brought a treat She had the power to change things By spreading love and all it brings One day she landed on George Bush Then caught the jet stream and was pushed Across the Atlantic to the Middle East Determined to replace hate with peace She fell from the sky as if heaven-sent And brought to Saddam Hussein a certain present Landing on one of his big toes That little fly changed two foes And turned them into two men Who loved each other as two friends And soldiers returned from overseas And all the prayers on all the knees Were heard and answered that very day Each, you can be sure, in its own way Peace reigned over the Earth And the little fly gave birth To a dozen more just like herself Whose progeny will always help Spread the germ known as love Sent from somewhere up above Buddha, Jesus, Mohammed and God in the sky All of them -- and many more -- are the fly

PodPoet 15-Feb-05/5:30 PM
Dovina and Dar_Angel: Thanks much for your nice comments. Dovina, you're right, this shouldn't be "Concrete." I was a little confused over all the categories, but now I understand. However, I can't change it without losing the current comments/votes, so it'll have to stay as such for now. Thanks again for the reviews.




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