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Bleed ,Rip and Tear (Sonnet) by NoSage

In senseless agony We let small wounds bind Our hearts and our minds. Don't just struggle with the bonds Bleed, rip and tear At the fabric that you wear, Don't cloak yourself with ignorance... EXPAND. What Is mediocre? An excuse to your friends? Would it stand up in the end? Really, Would God just say; "Well Jason, You were quite lukewarm in your faith today, But I will grant you entrance anyway".

Dovina 15-Feb-05/4:06 PM
Imagery is certainly an element of the Sacred Showing. While this sermon uses some imagery, it's basically telling us how to act, and I like it that way.




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