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Nuculer Power (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Last gasps and gaps Grasps life and wonders about The beds and blankets what We make to lie in Plutonium fusion rings Like the grinding teeth of Trolls long dead and unicorns Dressed for the occasion but Staring down the invasion of Frozen missiles there In the shrinking air Sing of capital gain From monarchal bane etc...

poodietat 8-Feb-05/9:19 AM
i like the double-meaning of "rings": "fusion rings" and "rings like".




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