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In Answer To Your Question (Prose Poem) by Dovina

Suppose I tell you I love you no matter what you do, that nothing you can do will make my love go away? Suppose I tell you I keep no logs of cruelties, broken promises, abuses, past or future? What if I tell you you can run to the ends of the earth and do the most horrible, unthinkable things, and if you come back, I’ll receive you with tears and a party? Suppose I say you don’t have to put on a mask, and it’s okay to be anything you are and I will never punish you, and when you mess up, I will never nag? What if you know my love isn’t based on how little wrong you do and you can hurt my heart but I will never hurt yours? What if I tell you there is no secret agenda, no trap door and no turning back? At such time as I can tell you this I will marry you.

blacksoul 30-Jan-05/6:01 AM
Dovina my first marriage did'nt work, because I married for all the wrong reasons, Being she was going to have a baby, and I thought that was the right thing to do shiiiiit! my father use to say do you love her? is it your baby? or you for sure.If not go see dana that was his word for D.N.A. but I would'nt listen
come to find out it wasn't mine. so this wasn't for better or worse it was for worse or better.




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