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A Dear John (Free verse) by misheila

I cried my last tears today. I left my old life today. I've made a change. You're not going to use me and you're done feeding me the lies I was your mat,a place to wipe your feet. I was your on call punching bag. No more will I take it from you. I'll give you no more credit,I'll give you no more love. You've said your last cruel word to me. I've cried my last tears for you. I've left my old life and I've left you.

silentstare 16-Jan-05/2:08 AM
Yeah dude, I like it. It's really basic, but also universal. We've all been there. I just wish you would've added more details, but maybe that ain't your style. Anyway, good.




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