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I love (Free verse) by Leigha Browning

I love it when you hold me close, and whisper in my ear, I love hanging by your every word, and dangling by them here, I love it when you grab my face, and kiss me softly on the lips, I love the way our bodies "FIT", and when you touch me with your fingertips, I love the way you brush my hair, out of my eager face, I love how you know just where to touch, to make my steady heartbeat race, I love the way our hands, fit when they're entwined, I love how your sweet embrace, is never hard to find, I love the way we talk, for hours at a time, I love how your love, always makes me wanna cry, I love how I can do, anything i have in mind, I love how there's no boundaries, therefor no way to "cross the line", I love the way you let me do, anything I wanna do, I love how you look at me, and how you do it too, I love the way we sit around, and pass the hours by, I even love our stupid fights, cuz they show how much we try.

RION12 14-Jan-05/8:19 PM
I really think love is great even if I don't know the real reason for it. You make it sound a lot more better then it already is.

I have had a lot of bad things happen when I was with somone and when I read this poem it helped me think about all the good things that happened. I looked on the bright side for once.




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