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spiritually driven (Free verse) by Crakyamuni

Flawed but fundamental, partners in peace I sense the seething of a more covert beast Dystopia in style paper tigers for blessing How will we package the JUJU were pressing? My eyes,general, are being obstructed This uneven pupil can sense that we mucked it These words will not reach them, time will not heal them But the love they have gathered will invite you to steal them Together we loot hope,death, and wealth Fuck the old gaurd of Northrop,401k, and stealth Break em, shake em, and fuck em real good make love to your point scale, like a good demon should Bear us your dark heart, in all it's injustice we'll sing the sad songs of the dead and combusted Dance with me general, dance like you care and we'll demolish the good things and pretend we're not there

Crakyamuni 10-Jan-05/12:42 PM
can i get a vote ? Throw me a fuckin bone here.




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