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Existential questions (Other) by kawakurdi

Don’t press me hard, I don’t have much to impress What exists more, exists even less What IS IS NOT, What IS NOT IS It is the question of hours and days Relativity is Absolute, Absolute is Relative And Eternity is beyond the living formative Rational analysis is not life analysis Man is not the sole life-form axis Earth is not the sole entity of universe All what is there is not the invisible necklace There is no ladder, no Adam, no Eve But Water, Fire, Sand, and Air to retrieve 1/1000000000000 and less is our contemporary knowledge Man himself is a riddle in his own cage Live for life, like a lame duck Don’t moan for a loss, delight in luck A trivial advice this is too I know Pain is the mirror of this life so Unity of contradiction or disunity Is the essence of all eventuality Just take it as a game, a game it is With not much joy as the result is amiss

zodiac 10-Jan-05/4:13 AM
None of these lines are actually questions. I'd change the title. Or just insert questions marks more or less at random for a neat question-y effect. For example:

Relativity is Absolute? Absolute is Relative?
And Eternity is? beyond the livi?ng formative.




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