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I have Learned to Let Go (Free verse) by Joe-joe

I have learned to let go And only now have firm command For what I thought would suddenly flee Stayed tranquilly instead in open hand I have learned to let go And all those fears have gone astray Sworn as they once were In lost thought that no longer hold sway I have learned to let go And now see you in proper tone As visions give way to you in true flesh And I for once am no longer alone

zodiac 26-Dec-04/4:58 AM
If you didn't think it was a contradiction, there'd be no point in your posting the comment. I'm willing to grant there was no point.

Of course they're different. But if you believe 1) you necessarily believe 2). That's the part you didn't get. Now you'll say you do. Wrong, you still don't.




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