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I have Learned to Let Go (Free verse) by Joe-joe

I have learned to let go And only now have firm command For what I thought would suddenly flee Stayed tranquilly instead in open hand I have learned to let go And all those fears have gone astray Sworn as they once were In lost thought that no longer hold sway I have learned to let go And now see you in proper tone As visions give way to you in true flesh And I for once am no longer alone

Dovina 22-Dec-04/10:43 AM
So your goodbye was not final.
We have two theories here on Poemranker:
1. Poets, who are dim, write nonsense.
2. Poets who are dim write nonsense.
I see -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. adheres to both.
Which do you prefer?




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