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Charms (Limerick) by auscot

She was big and her name was Anon, she had charms you could clamber upon. someone looked at her breast and loudly expressed, not many of those to the tonne.

fevriere 21-Dec-04/9:01 AM
Love it. Sounds all drunken and clumsy. Might want to put line 5 in speech marks.




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