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Math Poem (Free verse) by Dovina

1-1 = ½-½ 2–2 = 1–1 Taking half from half is the same as taking two from two. ½/1 = 1/2 2/4 = ½/1 Half of a thing is the same as a quarter of two. (Hang in there, follow the symmetry.) 1*1 = ½*2 ¼*4 = 1*1 Half of two things is the same as a quarter of four. ½+1½ = 2+0 1+1 = ½+1½ Two and nothing more is the same as one and one. Subtract, divide, multiply, add. Zero, half, one, two. Can you equate the series? I wish the tools were here to render clearly, math expressions eloquently— integrals, Laplaces, differentials— love, hate, fear. It’s like painting with a greasy finger. I wonder how van Gogh might have written a poem. Yeah, I know— with a gun in a wheat field.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20-Dec-04/1:47 PM
Surely you're big enough not to care what I think? Particularly if I'm the failed Spiderman you seem to think I am. My question was perfectly straightforward. But you chose to fudge it. Your 'answer' didn't even come close to being an answer. You could have just told the truth, which makes me think you don't want me to know the truth.

I think the truth is that you only gave the poeme a 9 because it flattered you. Let's face facts: POETICALLY, IT WAS A PILE OF WANK. Nearly as good as Yeats? lol. Why didn't you just say 'no' when I asked you?




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